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My First Level



Author : Soulless Mario

Votes : 12
Rating : 95%
Views : 1188
Type : SMF2
Difficulty : Easy
Posted : 16/09/2014
Status :
Section 2

Description :

This is the first level I have ever created. Please give me advice on how I could improve to avoid flaws in my future levels. Hope you enjoy it!

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09/18/2014 08:27 pm
SkoplerVision : 9/10

For a first level is really awesome, I like how you employed the tiling making a nice design, also the challenges were nice too, I didn't felt it as an epic level but I have to recognize this is actually one of the best first level ever.

I found some problems on it, like the unnecessary spring board at 940x (I recommend to make it necessary like a tall part), bad wood tiling at 1660x (on this case, instead of tile 285 put 280 for a better combination) and some unused space at the end.

Really I wanted to give a 10, but those flaws don't let me, however, I still thinking it is a nice way to start making SMF2 levels, if you keep working hard on it maybe you could be one of the most recognized users on PG, I could assure that :)

You got 9.3/10

09/17/2014 05:04 pm
ConfirmSMW : 10/10

First rule of Pouetpu: First levels are never supposed to be of high quality. You broke that rule. O.o

09/17/2014 09:46 am
Q12546wer22 : 10/10

Of course a 10,this is just.......how can your first level being this quality!? O.O
scenery,challenge,creative and everything in this level,didn't,looks like a first level,and until now even some of old users can't make something like this.
I see there's unuse space after the end point,and powerup being a bit too many at sometimes,but I still gonna give a perfect score.....yes,this level is impressed.

09/17/2014 07:39 am
felipe de farias : 10/10

wow awesome first level. it's so great, the gameplay,the challenges,the design... awesome. don't lie to me, is really your first level? great :):)

OBS: have some unused space after the green orb and have some bad airship tiling at X:1680, but will rate 10/10. but next time fix this errors. use all space you have and fix the airship tiling. to make correctly, you need switch between 280 and 285. just look the numbers on editor :):)

09/16/2014 10:48 pm
egyptian mario : 10/10

wow!!!!!!
100% for a first level!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you will be a pro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and the master of super mario flash 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

09/16/2014 10:22 pm
Factor M : 10/10

This is a really good level. It faultered a little towards the end but everything else was fine.

09/16/2014 09:39 pm
oomphalapompatronium : 10/10

Wow. This level is awesome!! It's fun and creative and really awesome!! It's incredible that this is your first level!

My one concern, very small, is that you may have added too many coins. This is an extremely minor flaw, enough to deduct about 0.05 points from, and probably some other people like the amount of coins you put. So unless other people agree with me, keep doing what your doing with the coins. And keep making levels the way you are now, because this level was awesome and you are a great level maker!! Good luck in future levels!!